Short Story

I finished my short story last night around midnight, which proved for a rather dark ending sentence. Everything was wrapped up nicely though, and I've turned it in. I got a little lazy in the end and didn't put in as much detail for some of it towards the end, but I hope it's okay. We'll be reviewing our stories with peers tomorrow, so I'm interested to see what people have to say about it. It's a darker story than what I usually write, and more gruesome, so I'm sure it'll shock some people. We'll see what happens tomorrow.
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